Saturday, April 19, 2008

Blood Lock- Chapter 1- The Flash Back

Years ago, when Daphani was born, Pires developed a plan to keep his only granddaughter safe. He stole the key to the lock and hid it before he was murdered by a fleet of werewolves, ogres, even fairies. Here comes the flash back.

Years ago, Pires was discussing with Jakiline, “I don’t want Daphani to be engaged in our wars.” Jakiline agreed, "Yes, she is our only granddaughter.” suddenly, she grew serious, “but what are we going to do about those hair- raising monsters?”
“They’re after the lock, they want it all for them self,” Pires added. They looked at baby Daphani,
“I must take that key, no one will be after that lock if there isn’t a key,” Pires looked at Jakiline.
Jakiline gazed at the lock, “we shall leave this lock around her waist, it wont be able to be removed.” so Jakiline used a chain to hang the lock around. Soon, he set off to hide the lock.

As Pires soared through the land he found an abandoned castle. He landed on the balcony and opened the window. He walked across the room in silence and darkness. The room was dark, dusty and covered in webs. He sneaked down the hall until he heard a bell noise, the sound of fairies. He zoomed across the hall and into the attic. The attic wasn’t empty, when he looked up; he was a fleet of bright tiny fairies that were gazing in passion at him. Suddenly, “ATTACK!” commanded the general fairy. Pires hissed loudly and in a swift move, he broke through the roof. He fled into the forest, his heart beating, the branches scratching his skin. The rush was deadly and filled with hopelessness. Soon he landed in a, what he thought to be, safe area surrounded trees. “You are surrounded!” a deep monstrous voice proclaimed. Werewolves appeared from the west/ southwest, ogres from the north/ northeast, and fairies from the east/ southeast.
“Give us the key,” commanded the ogres.
“No! Give the key to us! And your granddaughter too!” howled the werewolves.
“No” in a high pitch voice, “give it to us”
“SHUT UP!” exclaimed Pires. “None of you will get it, it’s a game of hide and seek, go find it.”
“Don’t lie to us,” the ogre said, “you did not hide it yet, it is still in your pocket, I can smell the blood of 1000 women.”

Suddenly, the ogres attacked him at once, followed by the werewolves. Oddly, the fairies watched. They did not join; they left the dirty business to the barbarians. Pires fought and spilled blood, high kicks, power punches, and slashing with his nails. When the fairies saw that the barbarians were losing, they joined in. They didn’t have the strength and size like those others but they had magic, they used bright powdery sprinkles to blind they're enemies. Pires choked and hissed at the powder, they glowing light burned his eye until he withdrew and fled to a lake. He dove into the lake with the fairies 20 feet behind; he took the key and fed it to the Loch Ness Monster. (Remember they live in Scotland) the water beast took it in well and thanked Pires for the beast didn’t know what it just ate. When Pires got back on land the fairies burned him alive, he hissed and screamed and in a way, he sent notice back to Jakiline, in a super sonic beam that bats can understand by hearing. Pires beamed,

“I’ll be back! Back for the key!” shouted Pires.
He shouted until he was burnt into ashes. When the fire burned out, the silhouette of Jakiline appeared in the moon's light. She swooped down and in one flick of the wrist, she gathered his ashes. Jakiline swore to protected Pire’s ashes and Daphani until she was 16 because then she would be old enough to learn her fate.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

AWESOMENESS! Great job Ada! I saw everything vividly. Great detail
~Mayen